For my research proposal memo process log, I chose grammer: use commas with introductory elements. According to the Purdue OWL Online, “introductory phrases set the stage for the main action of the sentence, but they are not complete clauses. Phases don’t have both a subject and a verb that are separate from the subject and verb in the main clause of the sentence.” I have corrected this sentence from my research memo: “After some long thought and research on communities, I have decided to stay within a community I know fairly well, my church.”
For my technical memo process log, I chose grammar: introductory elements (commas). I had this same grammar issue in my research proposal memo. It is the grammer problem I seem struggle with most. According to the Purdue OWL Online, “introductory phrases set the stage for the main action of the sentence, but they are not complete clauses. Phases don’t have both a subject and a verb that are separate from the subject and verb in the main clause of the sentence.” I have corrected the following sentence from my technical memo: “For my primary research, I collected information about both the worldwide Mormon Church community and the local Atlanta congregation community.”
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